Coursework: Preliminary exercise feedback and LR

1.) Teacher Feedback: “www, miss-en-scene, guitar/performance, mirror balls, different locations, golden, clothing props, typography, post production, eye edits, slow motion, framing, close ups, industry, match on action, cropping 

Ebi: lip syncing, framing/aspect ratio, more flash editing like the eyes”

Class feedback: WWW: disco ball, aesthetic, costumes, opposing motifs, colour scheme, angles, tracking shots, 

EBI: make it fade out , lip sync

2.) I’d like to continue the fast pace montage editing like within the eye scenes as well as re-film the entire second part to a higher quality. I also need to work on the format how how the video will be framed for the TikTok format. 

3.) I think I continued to use the idea of motifs and certain theorists throughout both my statement of intent as well as the actual music video production.

4.) I have learnt not to use a photo based camera for video work due to the lack of quickly adjustable appiture as well as not to procrastinate with filing as it is best to get it over with as soon as possible. 

5.) I will be redoing and re-filming the entire of the disco scene and possible adding another setting because I do not believe the disco scene on its down as it currently stands is entertaining enough and it does not propagate the amount of motifs I want it to convey.